Good teamwork. Everything fits to each other. The illustrations tell a story and the book itself too. The wallpaper-cover was a good choice because it makes the book look like a limited edition object, which is important when working with cheap production methods. The paper you used is a little too thick for the amount of pages you have, but i like the feel of it and the light yellow/beige color works well with the black ink.
Let us come to the critic. I think you did very beautiful illustrations and this only with the material you found in the street. I like the fold-out page with the punched-out buildings and the transparent sheet with the sprayer. These "special effects" help you to give the reader a surprise. I think you could have used these effects more directed when working on the order of the pages, the dramaturgy of the book. Coming closer to the end i was missing an effect like this. Something to make me wake up and make me motivated to read the "Gran Final".
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Good teamwork. Everything fits to each other. The illustrations tell a story and the book itself too. The wallpaper-cover was a good choice because it makes the book look like a limited edition object, which is important when working with cheap production methods. The paper you used is a little too thick for the amount of pages you have, but i like the feel of it and the light yellow/beige color works well with the black ink.
Let us come to the critic. I think you did very beautiful illustrations and this only with the material you found in the street. I like the fold-out page with the punched-out buildings and the transparent sheet with the sprayer. These "special effects" help you to give the reader a surprise. I think you could have used these effects more directed when working on the order of the pages, the dramaturgy of the book. Coming closer to the end i was missing an effect like this. Something to make me wake up and make me motivated to read the "Gran Final".
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