You both worked well together. The book is nice to read. You found a stimulating order of pages, working with the contrast between full page spreads and lose illustrations. The pages are easy to turn and to flip, which increases the comfort of reading. The hidden illustrations are your secret weapon, they make the reader wanting to explore the book without only thinking in the immediate "selling-point-attraction".
The cover, which makes the book look like a bag is a nice idea, and because you used a real bag and you cut it in pieces, the idea works well. It is good that you didn't spent too much time on doing the cover, because, me personally, do not trust a book which's cover has cost more time and money than its content. Well done.
One more remark to the use of the images. Be careful with doing illustrations for spreads. Sometimes the cut in the middle looks very violent, especially in the spread of the baby.
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You both worked well together. The book is nice to read. You found a stimulating order of pages, working with the contrast between full page spreads and lose illustrations. The pages are easy to turn and to flip, which increases the comfort of reading. The hidden illustrations are your secret weapon, they make the reader wanting to explore the book without only thinking in the immediate "selling-point-attraction".
The cover, which makes the book look like a bag is a nice idea, and because you used a real bag and you cut it in pieces, the idea works well. It is good that you didn't spent too much time on doing the cover, because, me personally, do not trust a book which's cover has cost more time and money than its content. Well done.
One more remark to the use of the images. Be careful with doing illustrations for spreads. Sometimes the cut in the middle looks very violent, especially in the spread of the baby.
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