Nice use of materials. The only book which smells (stinks). The material you used for the cover goes well with the "binding". Very rough, very street-like. There are a lot of stories in this book which makes me wanting to read the book over and over again, but unfortunately without having assisted your presentation many of them aren't easy to understand. Which is a pity, because the stories i heard from you were very interesting. ... and i think when you explained them to the class, everyone was fascinated and very much entertained.
My assumption is that you were too busy in finding and defining the stories and spots, that you had left too less time to find the right way to communicate them to the reader. The book looks to me like a documentation for yourself, out of which you could generate many books.
If you would have had more time, i would have suggested that you add spreads to give each story more importance and synchronize the amount and order of pages with the speed of the reader.
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Nice use of materials. The only book which smells (stinks). The material you used for the cover goes well with the "binding". Very rough, very street-like. There are a lot of stories in this book which makes me wanting to read the book over and over again, but unfortunately without having assisted your presentation many of them aren't easy to understand. Which is a pity, because the stories i heard from you were very interesting. ... and i think when you explained them to the class, everyone was fascinated and very much entertained.
My assumption is that you were too busy in finding and defining the stories and spots, that you had left too less time to find the right way to communicate them to the reader. The book looks to me like a documentation for yourself, out of which you could generate many books.
If you would have had more time, i would have suggested that you add spreads to give each story more importance and synchronize the amount and order of pages with the speed of the reader.
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