A very nice book, with a lot of special features (hair). Nice paper, nice illustrations and a nice cover. It would have been as well nice to hear your presentation, because there are some things i do not understand. Why, for example you used a envelope as a cover? Do you want to send the dogs somewhere? Why there are no illustrations of dogs from the middle of the book on until the end? Are we seeing Barcelona from the point of view of a dog?
From the stories you told me i know more about the book and its illustrations than it is able to communicate by itself. There are missing some explanatory spreads. ... and i think you should work on the dramaturgy of the book. Why the illustrations follow this order? Why they aren't at another spot in the book? Is there a reason the illustrations have this order and which is the reason?
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A very nice book, with a lot of special features (hair). Nice paper, nice illustrations and a nice cover. It would have been as well nice to hear your presentation, because there are some things i do not understand. Why, for example you used a envelope as a cover? Do you want to send the dogs somewhere? Why there are no illustrations of dogs from the middle of the book on until the end? Are we seeing Barcelona from the point of view of a dog?
From the stories you told me i know more about the book and its illustrations than it is able to communicate by itself. There are missing some explanatory spreads. ... and i think you should work on the dramaturgy of the book. Why the illustrations follow this order? Why they aren't at another spot in the book? Is there a reason the illustrations have this order and which is the reason?
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